This is not an edit!

This booking is for a general overview of my thoughts on your first 20,000 words. This is great if you're not sure you're heading in the right direction, or you need help developing the plot going forward. I will make notes using Track Changes, and I will also include a separate document that lists things I love, things that left me with questions, things I think could improve, and some guidance on where to go next.

Payment is due before you send me your manuscript.