Compassionate, honest and insightful in-depth written feedback on a screenplay (up to 120 pages.) Includes a 15-minute start-up convo and one-hour follow-up.

Help your story reach more of its potential:

• Find out what's working, and the missed opportunities/areas for improvement

• Raise the story stakes

• Clarify and strengthen character development and theme

• Trust your own voice

• Re-start momentum when inspiration lags

Paypal below or Venmo @Laurie-Lamson to book a 15-minute start-up meeting.

After you book, I will request your screenplay as a PDF file.

Within about 10 days, I will send you 8-11 pages of in-depth feedback and suggestions.

After you have a chance to absorb that, we can schedule a free 45 min-1 hour follow up to ask any questions and brainstorm solutions together.